Tuesday, 6 October 2009

Initial Animatic And Audience Feedback




Audience Feedback


Chris Benisek
Age: 17
Comments:
  • got confusing in the middle
  • not enough blood!
  • not sure if the comedy was intentional
  • why was there a random girl? what was the purpose?
  • i enjoyed the soundtrack


Tom Copland
Age: 17
Comments:
  • unclear narrative
  • not very convincing acting

Conor Potts
Age: 17
Comments:
  • I liked the storyline
  • music needed to go together better


Alex Jowett
Age: 17
Comments:
  • zombies may be hard to make look realistic in the actual trailer


Joe Shrimpton
Age: 17
Comments:
  • more of an introduction at the start is needed
  • soundtrack worked well
  • would look better and scarier if it was set at night


Helena Beason
Age: 17
Comments:
  • Unclear as to why the two characters thought it was a zombie
  • relevance of woman was unclear
  • would look better set at night
  • better looking zombie!
Since doing this animatic my idea has slightly changed however it is relevant to my story-line

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