Above is my first rough cut of my teaser trailer that have created and the first rough cut that i have shown to an audience, below are some of the comments i received, from this i can improve it according to a live audience
- as-well as an american age rating screen have a version with a UK rating screen
- Treadman character does not project his voice loud enough
- change the font to represent genre
- Some of the voices are too quiet
- music does not go with the production title
- Girl is laughing when getting her stomach ripped open
- Elroy does not appear as their friend
- Colour of the font
- Over dub some of the voices
- controversial rock music
- eery music should be added
- speed up the spade hit
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